Thursday, 30 January 2014

Repressive Discourse Features

One way in which this online advert has used repressive discourse strategy is firstly by using a colloquial tone to build a relationship with the reader. They use things like ‘best pals’ and ‘mug of builders’’ by using a friendly tone they are putting themselves on the same level as the reader. If the language used doesn’t seem different from the audience then it could mean they are more likely to donate, or join in with what is being advertised, because it seems more familiar.

Another technique that is subtly exerting power is the litotes of ‘just click here.’ They want the audience to click on their links to get more information. This differs to the oppressive strategy they used at the beginning of the advert by saying ‘order you free event pack’ and ‘download free resources right now.’ The author has, most likely, assumed that if the audience have read to the bottom of the page then they are already likely to be interested in the subject matter so they don’t have to be as harsh with their phrasing.

The advert includes a lot of synthetic personalisation, which is used my to the same effect as the more intimate and colloquial tone – to gain trust and build a relationship with the reader. By addressing the audience with ‘you’ it become more personal. If the advert seems to be speaking to one person, rather than a large group of people, then it may be easier to influence and encourage individuals to take part in their activity. “The money you raise will help us” is a declarative statement which gives the illusion that the reader doesn’t actually have a choice on whether or not they want to raise money. The advert is guaranteeing that people will want to help and raise money. This determination is what makes the advert hard to ignore.

Also the charity uses modality, for example, ‘you can’ which again seems to suggest an optional response. It also widens the audience if they are suggesting that any one is able to hold their own Tea Time. That way people that may have felt like they weren’t able to do it, because they didn’t have the available resources, are more likely to join in and help the campaign. With is only emphasises by the triplets used afterwards ‘anywhere- at home, in the office, your local hall.’